My First English 1020 Essay

Well I just got done writing my first English 1020 essay not too long ago, and it wasn’t too bad. It was pretty rough in the beginning because I wasn’t really sure what to write about or what I should be looking for in a ad for this essay. After we had class that one day and you gave us the example of the Special K, the lotion, and the other ad I can’t seem to remember right now, everything started to clear up. So I went to the store and bought a magazine so I could pick advertisements for the essay. I ended up with three I liked they were an advertisement for Diesel Clothing Co, L’Oreal Thickening Two in One Shampoo Plus Conditioner, and Hennessey Cognac. I like these ads because they showed me the mind frame of an advertiser, and how they view us young men. They perceive us as very insecure and gullible men that may easily persuaded into buying their products very easily. So, after I had my ad I needed to get started and I got to say it was hard, but I am used to it because starting an essay is the hardest part for me. So after a lot of time I finally stared and was on my way. Once I got started it wasn’t too bad, in some parts it just flowed. After I wrote it I proof read it and realized that when I was flowing I was so caught up in the moment that I skipped some words here and there. Now I finished proof reading it and I think it came out good.